Cut the excess
A 10-minute editing pass that works for almost any post:
- Cut the empty opener
- Remove the first paragraph if it adds no context.
- One idea per section
- If the section drifts, split or delete it.
- Verbs over adjectives
- Trade descriptions for actions and examples.
- Shorten sentences
- Aim for ~20 words; break the long ones.
- Add a takeaway
- End with an actionable next step.
Clarity is mostly subtraction. If the draft got shorter, it probably got better.